I started writing my script and realized something was wrong. Don’t get me wrong, I like what’s been written so far, but the rest of the story need more. Needed more “umph” if you will. I added more scenes with the purpose of giving more weight to the Greg/Soul relationship and to give the upcoming character of Pam more importance.

I got rid of the Bartender character and included a new plot line that makes a bit more sense. There might be more changes, more scratches and more additions, still like always, here’s what I got:

  • Son’s place
  • Airport
  • Dad’s place
  • Car (driving)
  • Motel
  • Bar
  • Motel (night)
  • Motel (morning)
  • Diner (breakfast)
  • Car (driving)
  • Liquor Store
  • Motel
  • Bar
  • Car (driving)
  • Gas Station
  • Little League Game
  • Motel
  • Police Station
  • Motel
  • Car (driving)
  • Fair
  • Bar
  • Fair
  • Bar
  • Car (driving)
  • Side of the Road
  • Motel
  • Bar
  • Los Angeles
  • Liquor Store
  • Funeral

I should be getting back to writing the actual script soon. I might take a few more days to rough out the skeleton, though I’m actually a fan of what I re-wrote.

Until then.

– TAB

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