I started writing my script and realized something was wrong. Don’t get me wrong, I like what’s been written so far, but the rest of the story need more. Needed more “umph” if you will. I added more scenes with the purpose of giving more weight to the Greg/Soul relationship and to give the upcoming […]
I know it’s been a while. I blame myself for getting distracted, television mostly (a few films here and there). Truth be told, I actually finished this scene last night – unfortunately writing a post about it was the last thing I wanted to do.
Without any further ado, here’s the first conversation between Greg […]
I’ve been a bit distracted lately. Didn’t get anything done yesterday and only a bit today. I guess I’ve done a good amount of mental writing, but nothing down on paper. My sister’s in town this weekend so I’m not sure how much I’ll get done, hopefully a couple more scenes. Probably one if I’m […]
I got very little writing done today — a show called Wallander has been quite the distraction. These four scenes are very quick and contain no dialogue. I wanted the transition from Greg’s apartment to Soul’s house to be fast, making the contrast easier to recognize.
Go ahead and read what got done and I’ll talk […]
I officially started writing my script today! Exciting stuff, but before that a little housekeeping is in order.
On Day 7 I left you with a couple names – the name of my script and my two main characters. The title “Good People” might be straightforward to you or not. It might become more evident […]
I’m about to show you my script’s entire skeleton exactly how it was written down in my notebook. However, there are some things you should know before continuing. The main one being I write these notes for me. Sometimes these notes are detailed, but more often than not, they are simply there to elicit a […]
A quick writing sesh today. I figured out the final three scenes of the script:
Bar Car (Los Angeles) Funeral
These three scenes wrap up what I want to do with the Father/Son relationship. There is a clear change in their dynamic, but not necessarily anything set in concrete – the Son gets a certain […]
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